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Wasted Youth, Part 1 Wasted Youth, Part 1

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Spanish translation

Hi there!

Spanish translation have a bunch of spelling mistakes and (huge) grammatical errors, you should check that for the next part of the game.

As for everything else, it's a very nice game!

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Hungry Hungry Square 2 Hungry Hungry Square 2

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad, but not very addictive

Nice game. Simple and dynamic.

I see a problem: you can fool the game by moving the mouse out of the game screen and placing it in a different point. The hungry square will be teleported to that new point and by this you can easily, if you are fast enough, escape an imminent cornering.

Also, this is just an improved version of Hungry Hungry Square, isn't it? With better graphics, music, game over screen and stuff like that.

It's nice but I would not spend so many hours playing this one. Maybe adding levels with walls on them or something like that would make it more addictive. Penalizing moving the square to the limit of the screen would be fine too.

Keep it up!

RedWatchtower responds:

Yup it's an improved version of HHS, just like say EA's NHL 11 is an update of NHL 10.

I'm taking any feedback I get to continue improving and see what I end up with.
Your ideas are interesting and will be put in the idea bin for the future development.

Thanks for the ideas and the review!

Anime Tutor 1 Anime Tutor 1

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not bad, but could be improved

Well, I think I'm not gonna say anything you have not read before. ^^U

You should have elaborated this a bit more. Background, music (a loop would be fine, because it stops after some time), text (as some people have said to you: it is occasionally hard to read), animations (or at least some changes in the image, depending on the thing you are saying)...

In short, a bit of customization and not just a static image and plain text. Also, there are some typos over there and a little lack of information (for example, neko characters are just humanoids with some feline characteristics as neko = cat, not any animal - that is kemonomimi, wich also includes neko characters, of course).

I see this more like a blog entry than an informative flash... Very, very simple. But, hey! I think this could be a great idea to support and advise all those people who don't know about manga or anime!

Just keep it up and improve your flash and drawing skills! I hope to see more of your work in the future! :D

Good luck!

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Left4DeathInFire responds:

Thank You! You didn't just spit in my face.